Hey Mots, (you don't mind if I call you that do you?) I really did like this poem quite a bit!
Your flow is great, and the way you sometimes were almost rhyming, but not quite I think is awesome,
and I really loved this stanz-
Great job, keep writing!We lie side by side,
In a car on standby;
Our ship on this lovely cruise
Float or sink, I'll be with you.
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